Animals should not be used for the benefit of human beings unless there is evidence that the animals do not suffer in any way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Human beings are one species of

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animals

in general - primates. We

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are distinguished and classified compared to others

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the evolution of cognitive ability over time. So as to that point, in my view, it is better to not use other

animals

for our

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, unless it is proved that the

animals

do not suffer in any way. The major reason why

animals

should be treated well is that it is very inhumane if we kill

animals

for our own sake.

Animals

have

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feeling and

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,

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they definitely can sense their death and feel the pain when they experienced the process of slaughtering cattle.

For example

, I have seen a cow dropping his tears in the

cownhouse

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townhouse

cowhouse

when he felt he was going to be knocked off later. We have fought for many kinds of

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like woman's

right

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, but rarely done for

animals

. Another one is that many species are endangered to fulfil mankind's needs like food, fashions, scientific study, and so on. Experts reveal that the population of rhinos in Africa has

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drastically declined over the past few decades because of poaching for their horns which is believed to have the benefit of improving people's immune system and it is estimated few

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of them are now still alive. Any disappearance of any

animals

will have

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negative effect

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the ecosystem which is very

strong

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correlated to

environment

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sustainability. In conclusion, using

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animals

for

any

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benefits

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of people is very

inhumne

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inhumane

inhuman

because

animals

can feel

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pain. It

also

can cause the

spieces

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species

pieces

extinction if there is no control over the poaching.