«Some modern artists receive huge sums of money for the things they create, while others struggle to survive. Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation» To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently,

artists

in the contemporary art scene have divided into the poor and the rich in the

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commercial

fields. Some say that

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governments should support poor

artists

to survive and give them opportunities. I totally agree with

this

opinion because there are some advantages

outweight

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outweigh

dis advantages

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such

helps by

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society

.

To begin

with, for the art market, it is difficult to

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predict

what kind of art can be monetized.

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Commercial

galleries try to keep several

artists

, but not all

artists

can make a

success

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. In

such

a situation,

artists

should continue their

creation

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creations

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until they can get

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chances.

However

, it is

also

true that galleries cannot afford their living and production costs.

Therefore

the

goverment

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government

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them. On the other

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, some kinds of

arts

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art

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are difficult to sell in the market.

For example

, Japanese artist, Kota Takeuchi sets his

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theme

on the historical problems between Japan and the US.

Furthermore

, as his expressions are shown

on

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the

mainly

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performances, and always these works are difficult to sell

for

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collectors. In

such

cases, the authority should give

artists

their funds or support because these critical activities can give various aspects to

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society

. Admittedly, there are some

tax-payers

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who do not want to pay their money to

such

expressions.

For instance

, there

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a huge demonstration in Aichi prefecture, Japan in 2019 that residents

opporsed

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opposed

to pay

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the

goverment's

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government's

fund for the exhibition because some people could not accept the criticism of its

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theme

.

Nevertheless

,

such

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view is actually needed

to

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such

local people to look back

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society

and history. In conclusion,

although

some agreements between tax-payers should be needed, I believe that supporting

artists

by the government definitely causes positive impacts on

society

more than

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such

poor

artists

.