«Some modern artists receive huge sums of money for the things they create, while others struggle to survive. Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation» To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Recently,
artists
in the contemporary art scene have divided into the poor and the rich in the
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commercial
fields. Some say that
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governments should support poor
artists
to survive and give them opportunities. I totally agree with
this
opinion because there are some advantages
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such
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society
.
To begin
with, for the art market, it is difficult to
predicut
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predict
what kind of art can be monetized.
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Commercial
galleries try to keep several
artists
, but not all
artists
can make a
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. In
such
a situation,
artists
should continue their
creation
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creations
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until they can get
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chances.
However
, it is
also
true that galleries cannot afford their living and production costs.
Therefore
the
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government
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them. On the other
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, some kinds of
arts
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are difficult to sell in the market.
For example
, Japanese artist, Kota Takeuchi sets his
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theme
on the historical problems between Japan and the US.
Furthermore
, as his expressions are shown
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the
mainly
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performances, and always these works are difficult to sell
for
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collectors. In
such
cases, the authority should give
artists
their funds or support because these critical activities can give various aspects to
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society
. Admittedly, there are some
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who do not want to pay their money to
such
expressions.
For instance
, there
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a huge demonstration in Aichi prefecture, Japan in 2019 that residents
opporsed
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opposed
to pay
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the
goverment's
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government's
fund for the exhibition because some people could not accept the criticism of its
thema
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theme
.
Nevertheless
,
such
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view is actually needed
to
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such
local people to look back
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society
and history. In conclusion,
although
some agreements between tax-payers should be needed, I believe that supporting
artists
by the government definitely causes positive impacts on
society
more than
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such
poor
artists
.
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