You have recently visited a museum. Now write a letter to your friend about the museum you have visited. Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write: •where you went •what you saw there •how you felt about it

Dear Sam, I’m writing

this

letter in order to share my experiences about my visit to a museum. Let me explain to you below in detail. So,

last

weekend my family and I visited the War Memorial Museum in Jaisalmer. Over there, I saw the weapons that were used in the Kargil War fight with another country.

Moreover

, I saw the engines which were utilised, descriptions of soldiers who lost their lives during the war, and sculptures of a few heroes. Our tour guide provided us with a boatload of information about the happenings.

Further

, we saw a video consisting of short clips of our brave soldiers who spoke about the situation at that point in time.

Also

, we clicked plenty of pictures and tried out local cuisines at their in-house restaurant.

Overall

, it was an amazing experience, and I felt rooted in our motherland. The experience that I had here will always remain etched in my memories forever. I would highly recommend you to visit

this

place whenever you go to Rajasthan. Can’t wait to meet you! Warm regards, Katie Fernandes

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