You have recently visited a museum. Now write a letter to your friend about the museum you have visited. Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write: •where you went •what you saw there •how you felt about it

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Dear Sam, I’m writing

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letter in order to share my experiences about my visit to a museum. Let me explain to you below in detail. So,

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weekend my family and I visited the War Memorial Museum in Jaisalmer. Over there, I saw the weapons that were used in the Kargil War fight with another country.

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, I saw the engines which were utilised, descriptions of soldiers who lost their lives during the war, and sculptures of a few heroes. Our tour guide provided us with a boatload of information about the happenings.

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, we saw a video consisting of short clips of our brave soldiers who spoke about the situation at that point in time.

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, we clicked plenty of pictures and tried out local cuisines at their in-house restaurant.

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, it was an amazing experience, and I felt rooted in our motherland. The experience that I had here will always remain etched in my memories forever. I would highly recommend you to visit

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place whenever you go to Rajasthan. Can’t wait to meet you! Warm regards, Katie Fernandes

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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6 paragraphs

182 words

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You have recently visited a museum. Now write a letter to your friend about the museum you have visited. Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write: •where you went •what you saw there •how you felt about it

Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationship. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As a result of electronic inventions ,people do less physical activity and this is having a negative effect on their health . To what extent do you agree or disagree

We live in a world in which we are constantly exposed to advertising. To what extent does advertising influence our choices as consumers and what effect does it have on our lifestyle? Discuss this issue and give your opinion.

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

All large companies should provide sports and community facilities to the local community. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?