Some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help others. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Write at least 250 words.
It is believed by
people
that the most significant aspect of wealth is the ability to serve others. I totally agree with this
statement and believe that opulent people
can provide free education
and job opportunities to others.
Wealthy persons have a lot of resources and the ability to serve poor people
by providing free education
to their children who are unable to educate their kids on their own. Many rich people
donate money to NGOs and also
start schools for poor kids aiming to provide free education
or very low fees with scholarships. For instance
, Salman Khan, a famous celebrity in India, every year donates half of his income to his NGO ‘Being Human’ which works for the children’s education
earned by doing movies and TV shows. Every year he sets a target to educate more than 1000 children in India.
An affluent person could also
help by providing job opportunities in small businesses to economically disadvantaged people
who are incapable of getting a good job in multinational companies because of not well-education
. For instance
, a renowned elite person, Ratan Tata has many small businesses in developed countries and gives the opportunity to people
who are below the poverty line to work for his company. Moreover
, Mukesh Ambani, the world’s 7th richest person, started a company named JIO in India in 2016 and employed more than 20,000 people
.
In conclusion, a financially capable individual has the opportunity to work for the well-being of society by providing free elementary education
and income opportunities to the underprivileged society.Submitted by maliksheetal32 on
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