The two below chart illustrate the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation between 1918 and 2011 in both England and Wales

The two below chart illustrate the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation between 1918 and 2011 in both England and Wales
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The chart below compares the number of
households
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in
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owned and rented residential between 1918 and 2011 in England and Wales and the figure are given in percentage.
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, it is clearly observed that
households
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rented experienced a downward trend ,
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households
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in owned represented an upward trend in the same time frame. Interestingly, in 1971 both choices accounted
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the same proportion compared with other years. Starting with,
homeowner
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a homeowner
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in 1918 was the lowest ratio at solely 22% and followed by 31% in 1939 and 1953, respectively. From 1971 onwards, the
household
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number of household
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owners was
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significantly to 69% and dropped slightly in 2011 to 65%. Regard with,
households
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rented, was a peak at 78% in 1918 which accounted for the vast majority
among
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the rest periods, and followed by 69%
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in 1939 and 1953. It is noticeable that
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1971 onwards, it experienced a downward trend and slightly rose in 2011 at 35%.
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,
it is clear that
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in 1971 both accommodations had the same percentage at 50%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words households with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "downward" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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