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Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages

#people #children #life #outweigh
Planning to have a
child
 is one of the major decisions in
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a couples
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couples
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 life. In
this
 ear, people are delaying the idea of having a
child
due to
 several reasons, and the prominent one is to focus on their career goals.
While
 I accept that delaying a
child
 is having few disadvantages, I still believe that
this
 phenomenon is more likely to have a positive impact. There
are
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main
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 disadvantage of giving birth to a
child
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 later
age
 is
malfunctioning
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 of
reproductive
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 system.
This
 is because
after
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 the
age
 of 30,
uterus
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the uterus
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start
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 to
loose
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the
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 normal elasticity.
Thus
 there is
huge
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 difference between the contractions during labour time that leads to inaccurate monitoring. To illustrate, California
Gynaecologist
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 have found that pregnant women over the
age
 of 30 are at high risk of obvious complications
such
 as foetus death, premature delivery,
cord
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 around
neck
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.
However
, I would argue that the demerits of
planing
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 a
child
in
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 later
age
is
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 outweighed by the merits.
Firstly
, parents can improve the financial situation of the family before
child birth
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childbirth
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. The fact is that mother and father both can work hard in order to earn the required money without any difficulties or pressure.
Secondly
, having a
child
 after
period
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 of time can definitely help new parents to accumulate essential education related to parenting.
Therefore
, they do not have to face the challenges after the
child
born
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, and
child
 care will not
he
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be
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 compromised.
For instance
,
few
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 hospitals have already organised
the
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training sessions for
the
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parents about how to breastfeed a
child
, and what needs to be done before and after the pregnancy. In conclusion, It seems to me that
potential
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 benefits of having a
child
 later in life are more significant than the possible dangers that
was
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 already addressed.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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