Your best friend just had her first baby. You are currently overseas but will be returning to your hometown in a week. Write to your friend. In your letter: congratulate your friend tell her when you will be returning home ask when you could drop in to meet her and the baby

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Dear Ana, Congratulations on having a newborn baby, may God protect you and him, I hope you see him grow up with healthy and beautiful life. I'm sorry for not being able to

visit

you at the hospital when your labour happened or even now because I'm on holiday with my family visiting the sea, making barbecues and playing beach ball. I will return by aeroplane next week the 7th of July, if everything goes smoothly at 10 pm I may reach our home by taxi

although

my sister is waiting for us at the airport. I wonder when I can

visit

you to make sure you are and the baby in good health.

Moreover

, where can I

visit

you at your home or i can find you in your family house? I'm so excited that's why I hope the

visit

will be as soon as possible. Let's keep in touch Best regards Yours Rafal.

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