It will be better to have wide use of driverless cars for individuals and society.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Today,more and more people think it is better to use
driverless
cars widely for persons and society.Personally,I partly agree with this
opinion.
On the one hand,Driverless
technology
can make our driving more convenient and reduce the congestion of transportation.It is a difficult thing to drive a car for four hours at least on a long journey,especially one which needs a high level of concentration.With the help of driverless
,it is possible for anyone to have a long trip by himself who rely on that technology
.Besides
this
,more and more cars appear on the road but the width of the street is limited.Only if vehicles have a wise brain to regular a route about how to decline congestions,the transportation will be better than before.
On the other hand
,despite the advantage of driverless
for our life,I do not think that wide use can be better.With imperfect technology
,it is not suitable for every district of people to attempt this
auto-drive car.Safety issues are the immediate concern.There are some reports about humans and AI struggling for control over the steering wheel and the pedals. Those reports make quite a few people suspicious of whether the driverless
technology
is solid and reliable. As a matter of fact,the AI still can make a mistake occasionally,but it is not allowed to have more than one error.Thereby remaining the biggest drawback of this
driverless
technology
In my conclusion,I agree that it is entirely reasonable for a person to use an auto-drive car.However
,I do not support using it widely in society.Submitted by 2975842009 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
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- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
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- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite