Some people say that success is "10 percent talent and 90 percent hard work". Is hard work the key of success, or is talent also important?
Some people argue that fortune is "10
percent
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per cent
talent
and 90 percent
hard Change the spelling
per cent
work
". I strongly believe that there are pros and cons of both sides. In the following statement
I will give some examples.
In the first place, nowadays, some individuals think that success is a little bit Add a comma
,statement
talent
and more Change preposition
of talent
work
hard, but some do not think so. First and foremost, when it comes to talent
, is power
of our life. Add an article
the power
For example
, if a person has a
potential, she or he can achieve their goals easily. Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
, gift
is Add an article
the gift
a gift
unique
skill and not much mankind Add an article
a unique
have
. It is a Correct subject-verb agreement
has
such
thing it can brings
plenty of achievements and happiness to people. Change the verb form
bring
Furthermore
, it is common knowledge that everyone has a hidden ability. They must just look for from
themselves and learn something to see their Change preposition
apply
talent
. So, gift
is Add an article
the gift
a gift
crucial
key Add an article
the crucial
a crucial
of
success as well.
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to
On the other hand
, secondly
when it comes to hard work
, is important in fortune. This
is because everyone knows that when we work
hard we can achieve our targets. Like it is "no money no honey". So, if a person works hard who can do anything else either without any help or who does not need any gift
. However
, you have not to rely solely on hard work
or your potential. This
is because you may not know which is more you have and more crucial.
To sum up
, as you already know, both sides are equal. Although
, it is my perception that just not rely only on gift
of Add an article
the gift
a gift
work
hard, just Wrong verb form
working
look
for it from you and keep learning is the best key Wrong verb form
looking
of
success.Change preposition
to
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