Some people say that success is "10 percent talent and 90 percent hard work". Is hard work the key of success, or is talent also important?

Some people argue that fortune is "10
percent
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talent
and 90
percent
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per cent
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hard
work
". I strongly believe that there are pros and cons of both sides. In the following
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I will give some examples. In the first place, nowadays, some individuals think that success is a little bit
talent
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of talent
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and more
work
hard, but some do not think so. First and foremost, when it comes to
talent
, is
power
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the power
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of our life.
For example
, if a person has
a
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potential, she or he can achieve their goals easily.
Moreover
,
gift
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the gift
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is
unique
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skill and not much mankind
have
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. It is a
such
thing it can
brings
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plenty of achievements and happiness to people.
Furthermore
, it is common knowledge that everyone has a hidden ability. They must just look for
from
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themselves and learn something to see their
talent
. So,
gift
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the gift
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is
crucial
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key
of
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success as well.
On the other hand
,
secondly
when it comes to hard
work
, is important in fortune.
This
is because everyone knows that when we
work
hard we can achieve our targets. Like it is "no money no honey". So, if a person works hard who can do anything else either without any help or who does not need any
gift
.
However
, you have not to rely solely on hard
work
or your potential.
This
is because you may not know which is more you have and more crucial.
To sum up
, as you already know, both sides are equal.
Although
, it is my perception that just not rely only on
gift
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the gift
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of
work
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hard, just
look
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looking
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for it from you and keep learning is the best key
of
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success.
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