The first chart shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emission which result from this energy use
The pie charts depict the consumption of
energy
and products of energy
utilized by homes in Australia.
Overall
, heating consumes almost half of the energy
while
water heating emits more gases.
The household energy
used for heating is about two- fifth, less than a third is used for water heating and about a fifth energy
is for other appliances. Refrigeration, heating and cooling used the remaining 14% of Change preposition
of energy
energy
to function.
There is 32% of gas emission when boiling water which is almost the same as the energy
used. The vapor
released when other appliances are in use is more than a quarter and less than a fifth from refrigeration. A quarter of greenhouse gas is emitted from heating, cooling and lightening.Change the spelling
vapour
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