A friend from overseas is planning to visit you soon. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain why you are looking forward to the visit • describe the accommodations you have available for your friend • suggest some things to do during the visit Begin your letter as follows

Dear Sarah, It's been a long time since we get in touch,

last

year at my wedding that's true. I'

so glad you are planning to visit me next weekend, I feel over the moon. I'

looking forward to your visit so we can go and hang out together just like old college days. I have an apartment which I think it's suitable for you to come for five days, it's not too cheap or too costly. It has a two-bedroomText

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well-decorated kitchen and a spacious living room. I suggest to have a small trip to the waterfall that my city is famous for and it is the most important tourist destination.

In addition

to ,that I'

thinking of playing tennis, visiting the cinema and watching some movies I hope we will spend a cheerful time together and make unforgettable moments. I'

looking forward to your opinion Best regards Yours Rafal.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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8 paragraphs

158 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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