IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 7.5

Nowadays we have too many options to what extent do you agree or disagree?

#options
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Nowadays, some
people
Use synonyms
 believe that there are too many
choices
Use synonyms
 for us, which attracted numerous controversies and drawn the attention of the public. In my eyes, I totally agree with
this
Linking Words
 opinion. First of all, it has been argued why I think we have too many
options
Use synonyms
.
Although
Linking Words
 the positive aspects of many
choices
Use synonyms
 must have been taken into account, I still reckon it has in many ways damaged
people
Use synonyms
's lives.
For example
Linking Words
, one well-known Indian nutritionist, Daljit Sigh once said ''Many restaurants offer heaps of
options
Use synonyms
 for food on their menus, which causes
people
Use synonyms
 to order too much.
In other words
Linking Words
, overnutrition is terribly bad for our health.'' It is
thus
Linking Words
 clearly shown that we have too many
choices
Use synonyms
.
Moreover
Linking Words
, another aspect that we should consider is the social reason. As for as society is concerned, the ultimate aim of society is to make
people
Use synonyms
 happy.
For instance
Linking Words
, one recent article published in Nelson Magazine revealed that too many
options
Use synonyms
 bring
people
Use synonyms
 stress. When we go shopping online, there are huge
choices
Use synonyms
. Actually, it should have been a pleasure when it comes to shopping.
However
Linking Words
, it is getting stressful because we can not make a decision easily.
Consequently
Linking Words
, it is a clear indication that we have too many
choices
Use synonyms
.
To sum up
Linking Words
, I strongly reckon we have too many
options
Use synonyms
due to
Linking Words
 the reasons outlined above. In order to address
this
Linking Words
 issue, the government and
people
Use synonyms
 should make a concerted effort to find a solution.
Submitted by 721351736 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: