The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The data
shown
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is shown
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as
column
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a column
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bar chart and table,which compares (in pounds and working
hours
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each week) the monthly wage for different duties at two different
stage
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: fresher and having 3 years of
experiences
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experience
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.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that
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while
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underground drivers
work
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less
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hours
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per week compared to
firefighter
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a firefighter
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who works more but
earn
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less money In more
details
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detail
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, Firefighter works
highest
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the highest
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number of
hours
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with an average of
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55 compared to underground drivers who
work
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for 36
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only . Closely analyzing the table, which shows that police officers and nurses
work
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in
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similar
work
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hour
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hours
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per week 40 and 38 respectively Interestingly, The average income for underground drivers is the highest with about 50000
pound
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pounds
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for
fresher
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freshers
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and 51000
pound
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pounds
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for
3 year
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3-year
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experience
officer
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officers
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. The least amount of money received among these duties is
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a nurse
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nurse
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nurses
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who
receive
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approximately 180000
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yearly
yealy
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yearly
for
graduate
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graduates
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and 19000 for
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a nurse
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nurse
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nurses
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with experiences
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, work with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 3 times.
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