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The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The data
shown
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are shown
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 as
a
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apply
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two tables which compare the
number
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 of exchange candidates from European universities to Australia and the opposite in over 3 years ending in
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the
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span between 2007 and 2009
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that total the
number
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 of
students
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 coming to Australia is increasing sharply
staring
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starting
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 with 189
students
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reaching
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and reaching
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 226 candidates in 2009.
While
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students
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 going
in
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to
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 Europe to attend
universitiesfor
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universities for
universities
 studying is
isteadly
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steadily
steady
 constant,which is n equilibrium
number
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 for about 152 over the
in
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apply
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period
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the period
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 between 2007 and 2009 In more
details
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detail
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. AlthoughtAlthough French and
Netherland
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Netherlands
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 candidates
students
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 who want to study in Australia remain
stableconstant
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stable constant
.
Tthe
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The
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number
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 of
student
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students
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 from Germany and Sweden increases from 27 to 62 and from 24 to 42 respectively.
Wwhile
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While
 British
student
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students
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 studying in European universities are the least among other countries. Interestingly,
students
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 from France and Germany aim to study
increase
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increased
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approximately
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by approximately
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 about 9 and 8
students
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 respectively,
while
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 the
number
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 of
students
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 in Sweden ,
united
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the united
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 kingdom, and
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 dropped
with
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by
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 an average of 9
students
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 between 2007 and 2009.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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