A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

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Dear Anna, Great to hear from you that you got a new job in Amsterdam,

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been so long since we met each other but I haven't forgotten the wonderful time we spent

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year. Dusseldorf is a beautiful

city

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to live and the

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is a blend of modern architecture and preserved old buildings. the best part to live in the

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is the west side of the

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, where the old and new towns join. there are several river review apartments at affordable

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. I will text you some references to search for accommodation in that area. The public transport in the

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is well-connected and easy to access. The majority of the

city

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is connected by tram or metro rail. Buses are

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available to the outer side every thirty minutes from the central station. Ferry is connecting two sides of the river which is

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a time-saving option. The

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is very popular for art and clubs. You might get a lot of friends with similar tastes. the local cafes in the old town are the popular place to hang out, there is

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can meet new people. You should visit my home, I will text you the location. I can't wait to see you again. Best Wishes Jennifer

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
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for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

213 words

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