The table below shows the average monthly rainfall in two different cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the average monthly rainfall in two different cities. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the average monthly rainfall measured in inches for the city of Woodsville and Blacksburg. From an
overall
perspective, Woodsville had more rainfall throughout the months than Blacksboro. Woodsvile averaged 5 in January, reduced to 4, 3.75 in March, and
then
a very significant decline in April continuing
this
downward trend until it reached its lowest in July when it didn’t rain that much with just 0.75 but it rained more from August till December with a double increase from 1.5 in September to three in October, 6 in November, and 5.5 in the
last
month of the term. Blacksboro started the period with 3 inches of rain and had a slight rise to 4 in February which is actually the peak of rain throughout the year for the city, rainfall dropped by 1.5 in March and followed the same trend in April with April just having an inch. It went sub-1 from May till October with its lowest dip in July and August with just 0.01 and 0.04 respectively. Blacksboro had a low but double upward tick in volume from September till December ending the year with 2.5 inches. In summary, both cities did have their lowest rainfalls between the months of May and September but their peaks were opposite with Woodsville being
at the end
of the year whilst the city of Blackboro having hers at the beginning of the period.
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