The diagram below explains the process of making wood pellets, used to heat building

The flow diagram illustrates how wood

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used to heat buildings are made.

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, the process involves 7 steps and the raw material used is sawdust which is a by-product of

woodworks

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in a Sawmill. The sawdust is converted into

fibers

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of uniform size by hammering in a hammer mill and

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dampened with steam so as to soften and coagulate them. The softened/moist

fibers

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put through the holes of a pellet machine at a high pressure thereby forming

pellets

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. These

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cooled so as to remove the moisture, loose dust

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vacuumed off and the

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are packaged into bags with each bag containing a measured 18 kilogram of

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May 13, 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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4 paragraphs

115 words

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The diagram below explains the process of making wood pellets, used to heat building

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