The diagram below explains the process of making wood pellets, used to heat building
The flow diagram illustrates how wood
pellets
used to heat buildings are made.
Overall
, the process involves 7 steps and the raw material used is sawdust which is a by-product of woodworks
in a Sawmill.
The sawdust is converted into Fix the agreement mistake
woodwork
fibers
of uniform size by hammering in a hammer mill and Change the spelling
fibres
then
dampened with steam so as to soften and coagulate them. The softened/moist fibers
are Change the spelling
fibres
then
put through the holes of a pellet machine at a high pressure thereby forming pellets
.
These pellets
are then
cooled so as to remove the moisture, loose dust are
vacuumed off and the Change the verb form
is
pellets
are packaged into bags with each bag containing a measured 18 kilogram of pellets
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