The maps show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25-year period from 1980 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25-year period from 1980 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams give information about the transformation of a small village named Youngsville in New Zealand throughout one-quarter of a century period starting in 1980. The nature wood
area
was replaced by many new industrial buildings and public places.
Whereas
, the
area
to the north stayed almost unchanged. The most noticeable change recorded was in the south
area
of Alanah
River
where all the trees were chopped down to make way for new construction.
Besides
that, many houses along the railway line were replaced by two new skyscrapers.
Furthermore
, there was
also
a significant transformation in the southern
area
, with the emergence of a new industrial zone for warehouses and factories right next to the existing school and airport.
In contrast
, most of the trees to the north of the
river
still remained. Some minor woodland parts were converted into a golf course, a park and car parking facilities. The construction of a new stadium in the northeast corner of the lake was
also
recorded
along with
the extension of the railway line from the
river
to the northern corner.
Finally
, a new Marina was built at the mouth of the
river
.
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