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People have different ways of escaping stress and difficult modern life. Some read, some exercise and other work in their garden . What are the reasons for stress? What are the best way of reducing stress?

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Recently, there are a lot of ways in which people escape from
stress
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 and hurdles of
modern
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the modern
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 world,
stress
 is becoming alarming and the
all
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the whole world is becoming stressful, some
over come
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overcome
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 it by reading, working in their gardening and other means. In
this
 discourse, it is my completion to humbly elucidate upon the cause of
stress
 and ways of reducing it.
Firstly
, one of the important causes of
stress
 in the modern world is that the sphere is developing daily and a plethora of development are taking place which are distorting and disturbing the well begin of human beings their psychological and physical health are at high risk.
For instance
, two months ago when they started the construction of
electronic
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an electronic
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 railway line in my country, several buildings were dismantled and the owner became homeless,
this
 is disturbing to mental health and can lead to
post traumatic
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post-traumatic
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stress
 disorder, which can indirectly lead to increase in population of hospital visit making life more stressful.
However
,
government
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the government
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 should try and use another means in establishing their infrastructure or
their
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they
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 should provide another house to the affected people.
Furthermore
,
another
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other
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 causes of
stress
 include increasing in age as individual increases in age they are beginning to worry about their health,
how
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and how
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 they are going to become dependent on people or their children all these can lead to
stress
.
However
, it can be reduced by having a good plan for the future, the government should make good provisions for the elderly, and individuals should live healthy live
while
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at
young
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a young
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 age. From the
forgoing
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foregoing
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, it can be deduced that
the
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apply
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life itself is stressful and full of difficulties,
therefore
individual
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individuals
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 and
government
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governments
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 have a vital role to play in order to reduce
stress
 and deal with life.
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