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These days in many countries fewer and fewer people want to become teachers particulary in secondly school. what are the reasons for this and how could the problem be solved.

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A generation ago, teaching in high school was considered an extremely well-respected and popular job.
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, in many parts of the world, very few people like to
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 in schools. I am going to examine possible reasons for
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 and suggest reachable solutions in upcoming paragraphs.
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 with,
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 unreasonable income compatible with an unbearable workload.
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, trainers have to
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 more and earn less than average salary compared to other fields. Apart from teaching in the classroom, they have loads of their profession on both weekends and nighttime preparation
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 as reports, lesson planning, checks homework, parents meeting and tests.
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, in the UK a doctor with five years of experience will earn much more than a school tutor with the same experience.
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, in , the classroom some children do not behave well with their mentors, which often causes them to give up teaching.
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, if lecturers, are paid a reasonable salary and there is a fair and transparent
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 allocation,
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 will not cause any problems.
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, the government should have to pay equal salaries like other professions, they have the right to get bonuses and rewards for appreciation of
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. So that, they got the ambience to
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 with happiness and do not feel any kind of burden or stress. In conclusion, the imbalance between the payment rate and a huge amount of responsibility was not fair enough for them. Government should raise money for the betterment of children's future
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 instructors.

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