You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter: Say what the problem is. Describe the accommodation you thought you were getting. Ask the provider to solve the problem.

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Dear Sir/Madam. I'm writing

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letter to inform you about the apartment problem that I faced. There is a big hole in the living room wall, and I have seen twice a mouse and it's mice. I thought that I will get well-arranged and clean accommodation

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the deal that we had made together. I thought it will be cosy and spacious. I hope you either send me someone who help me to catch the mouse or prepare me a new apartment or small house to stay in during my course time I'm looking forward to a positive answer and action. Yours sincerely Rafal Latif.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

106 words

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some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems such as railways and trams. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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