Young people are much more aware of and concerned about issues like the environment, poverty and animal welfare than previous generations. What is your own opinion?

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society, there are always comparisons between the previous
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generation
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more focused on
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hot topics
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as
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, poverty and animal attracts discussion.
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my personal perspective, I partly agree with the opinion. It is undeniable that the young class of
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society take more care of the hot topics. They have
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positive attitude and
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enthusiasm to take part in the massive project of protecting the Earth.
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the opposite, the elderly
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to retire and take time for themselves, so the news of global warming is just a normal thing to them.
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, young people have the right and advanced thoughts as they are updated
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the world. Part of the older
generation
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old-fashioned ideas.
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why the ways they react are different.
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, youngsters dream big, and they want to make a positive difference in the world. The concern
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environment
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or
such
things certainly
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them the perfect opportunities to
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their dream.
However
, the world in the past is different. It was not
this
polluted and damaged severely as it is now. That may be the reason why there is less concern that the young at that time, or in the other word, the older
generation
now, can take part
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. Industrialisation harms the environment so fast and
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that after a
generation
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more significant, and the youngsters can’t help but
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about
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. So, when the starter points of both sides are different, what is the point in comparing? In conclusion,
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believe the young
generation
do
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care about the big issues more than the previous, but I think
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importance
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of the problem that they must take action
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