The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98.

The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98.
The table chart represents the number of visits abroad by
UK
citizens
by
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different purposes between 1994 and 1998
while
the line graph illustrates their favourite areas in the same years. It can be seen clearly that the figure for holidaymakers experienced an upward trend from 1994 to 1998.
Moreover
, the rate for visitors who travelled to other countries on their holiday accounted for the highest proportion of travellers among other reasons.
In addition
, the majority of visitors opted for Western Europe, followed by North America during the same period. In terms of the motivation to travel, the figure for
UK
residents who travelled on their vacation maintained their dominance over the five years, accounting for three-thirds of
UK
visitors.
This
was followed by the number of
UK
citizens who opted for foreign nations
due to
their business.
Furthermore
,
according to
the below chart, Western Europe was the top most popular destination for
UK
tourists, which had approximately 20000 holidaymakers
while
North America was the second place of their liking with just above 1000
UK
tourists choosing to travel over the surveyed years.
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