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The table below shows the average monthly rainfall in two different cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the average monthly rainfall in two different cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table illustrates average rainfalls through a year in two
cites
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cities
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, respectively
Woodsville
 and
Blacksboro
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Blacksburg
.
Overall
,
two
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the two
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 cities are more
rains
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rain
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 in
winter
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the winter
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 season than
summer
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in summer
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.
To begin
 with
Woodsville
, from January to December, it shows declined figures from
February
 to August and
then
 rebounds starting in August. It
graually
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gradually
 rises and
peakes
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peaks
peaked
 at 6 in November. After that, average rainfalls decrease again. In similar,
Blacksboro
 is
also
 estimated similar shapes, but the rainfall peaks at 4 in
February
 and the lowest point is in July. It
also
 grows up
during
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from
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Augutst
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August
 to
February
. To compare
two
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the two
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 towns as monthly,
Woodsville
more
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is more
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 rains than
Blacksboro
, except in
February
. In
February
, the same figure is recorded, each is 4. The largest amount
rainfall
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of rainfall
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 gap is in November,
Woodsville
 seems about 6 doubles
highter
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higher
 than
Blacksboro
. In the July of
Blacksboro
, there is less rain nearly zero point.
Blacksboro
 can be drought from
in
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apply
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May to
in
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apply
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October because figures
shows
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show
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 under 1.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words woodsville, blacksboro, february with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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