The table below shows the average monthly rainfall in two different cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given table illustrates average rainfalls through a year in two

cites

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cities

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, respectively

Woodsville

and

Blacksboro

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Blacksburg

Overall

two

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the two

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cities are more

rains

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rain

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winter

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the winter

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season than

summer

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in summer

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To begin

with

Woodsville

, from January to December, it shows declined figures from

February

to August and

then

rebounds starting in August. It

graually

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gradually

rises and

peakes

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peaks

peaked

at 6 in November. After that, average rainfalls decrease again. In similar,

Blacksboro

also

estimated similar shapes, but the rainfall peaks at 4 in

February

and the lowest point is in July. It

also

grows up

during

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from

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Augutst

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August

February

. To compare

two

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the two

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towns as monthly,

Woodsville

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is more

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rains than

Blacksboro

, except in

February

. In

February

, the same figure is recorded, each is 4. The largest amount

rainfall

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of rainfall

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gap is in November,

Woodsville

seems about 6 doubles

highter

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higher

than

Blacksboro

. In the July of

Blacksboro

, there is less rain nearly zero point.

Blacksboro

can be drought from

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apply

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May to

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apply

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October because figures

shows

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show

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under 1.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words woodsville, blacksboro, february with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

162 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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