The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The pie chart displays people who have five different reasons when choosing means of transport to go to
work
.
Overall
,
it is clear that
health, fitness, and less pollution are the main reasons that people choose to ride bicycles,
whereas
people prefer using cars because of their comfort
reason
.
According to
the first chart, most of them choose health, fitness and less pollution as their priority, at 30% each. 15% of no parking problems is the third
reason
for them. The
last
two causes come from no costs and
faster
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than driving, not over 13%. Regarding reasons for driving to
work
, 40% of individuals choose comfort
reason
which is the highest percentage among others.
In addition
, they have the same proportion for faster than cycling
,
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and need to carry things to
work
. Safer than cycling presences as the lowest figure, only 11%, a double of it goes to distance to
work
reason
.
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