The bar chart shows the numbers of cars per 1000 people in 5 European countries in three years and compaire with European everages.

The bar chart shows the numbers of cars per 1000 people in 5 European countries in three years and compaire with European everages.
The given bar chart illustrates the
number
of autos per thousand people in five European territories in 2005, 2009 and 2015 in comparison with European averages.
Overall
, it can be seen that in
the
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country
one people were reluctant to own a car compared to four others
while
region five was the head
country
where folks owned more cars than the other four territories and its total numeral was higher than the average category. Looking at the details, in the nation
one
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300 people had cars in the first and the
last
years but in 2009 the
number
of folks who had autos increased to 400.
Following
this
, inland two, the
number
of car owners was from 450 to 550.
In addition
, in 2005 in
country
three, 700 nations had cars but these numbers continued to decrease
year
on
year
and were 600 in the
last
year
. As regards territory four, it was the only land with the exactly same numeral vehicle owners with 700 and
then
, in
country
five, over 800 communities hold wheels in 2005 and the numeral decreased in the following
year
but in the
last
year
almost everyone possessed a van. If we look at the
last
average category, the
number
of car owners ranked from 650 to 780.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, country, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.

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  • Trend
  • Stability
  • Significant
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Average
  • Comparison
  • Fluctuations
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Dip
  • Outperform
  • Lag behind
  • Demographic factors
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Mobility demand
  • Environmental concerns
  • Policy implications
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