The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided diagram gives information about the plan for a new supermarket construction in the future of a
town
named Use synonyms
Garlsdon
with two potential locations.
The main difference between the two sites is that S1 is outside the Use synonyms
town
, Use synonyms
whereas
S2 is in the Linking Words
town
centre. These sites can Use synonyms
also
be compared in terms of access by road or rail, and their positions toward three smaller towns.
The S1 option is the supermarket will be constructed in the countryside area to the northwest of Linking Words
Garlsdon
, but it is close to the residential Use synonyms
town
. Meanwhile, the S2 option is Use synonyms
also
close to the housing area, which surrounds the Linking Words
town
centre.
There are main roads from Hindon, Bransdon, and Cransdon to Use synonyms
Garlsdon
Use synonyms
town
centre, but Use synonyms
this
is a no-traffic zone, so it would be unable to access S2 by any vehicle. Linking Words
In contrast
, S1 lies on the main road to Hindon, but it would be more difficult to access Linking Words
this
place from Bransdon and Cransdon. Linking Words
Finally
, both S1 and S2 options are close to the railway that runs through Linking Words
Garlsdon
from Hindon to Cransdon.Use synonyms
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