In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The diagram explains a way in which
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instant
noodles
are made in
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industry. As can be seen, first the flour is loaded by truck from the storage silos. Afterwards, it is
transfered
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transferred
and delivered to the food industry. In the subsequent stage, after adding water and oil to flour in order to make a
dough
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to
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sheet.
Then
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strips to build strip lines on the
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Subsequently
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undergone the cooking and drying process they
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by
noodles
discs to form the
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shape. After that, they are put into the
cups
, which already have vegetables and spices in these
cups
.
Finally
, all the
cups
are
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labelled
and sealed for client
consumtions
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consumptions
consumption
.
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stages, which is
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beginning
with carrying on the flour by trucks from the storage places and ending up with sealing and labelling noodle
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  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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