Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Sports

have come to a human as a hobby or a career long before we implemented hygiene in our

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life. By now there are many

sports

differentiating in places it is played, instruments used or weather to play in. The most crucial factor would be if the activity could be done in groups or alone. For many

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it is an important factor to consider. Some are more keen on participating without being in a team and

others

can not play

others

. In

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I will name the main advantages

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both.

First,

sports

, which are done in groups, help a

person

to build trust in

others

. Gaining trust is needed not only between friends

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but

also

very important in the workplace. It shows us that only we could do the work, but

others

can do it too and by having more than one

person

on the job the goal could be achieved faster and have higher quality results. Another advantage of

group

sports

is that

people

tend to do better and reach greater goals rather than doing something alone. I have been a member of a dance

group

for 6 years, from

this

I have learned that I will not try as hard or do as much compared to the time when I was training with other

people

on the same moves.

In other words

, doing the same tasks and seeing

others

do

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gives

motivation

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to exceed your limits and in the long

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achieve more.

On the other hand

, training as an individual is great too. One of the advantages of

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group

sports

could be that you have much more space to see your weaknesses and address them in order to improve.

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lets a

person

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spot even the tiniest weak points faster than in

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group

of

people

.

Furthermore

, the faster the obstacles are seen the sooner

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can be dealt with and moved on to training.

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point to mention is that doing something in a

group

could mean great motivation for one and

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burden for another.

In other words

, a

person

who learns quicker than

others

could accomplish less than working alone, because of the wasted time

while

waiting for

others

to catch up. Training in

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group

sports

could let a

person

shine in their sphere. In conclusion, team

sports

can help a

person

to trust

others

more and build motivation to accomplish more. And the

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group

sports

will be beneficial in obstacle

addressment

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addressing

addressed

and achieving more

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because a

person

will not be wasting time

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waiting for teammates to catch up.