Shopping habit of people depend largely on are group they belong to but here are other factories too agree or disagree ? If yes to what extant ?

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In the current era, shopping became quite common in every family . I completely agree with the statement about the shopping habits of

people

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depending on their age group.

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, there are other factors too. I will explain both views in the below paragraphs in detail with relevant examples.

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women shopping in my country. Women always follow the trend even though if they have sufficient dresses , they need to buy new items always.

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, a recent survey from a newspaper article says that women spend half of the time a day browsing gadgets around shopping websites.

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, they will always follow the standards currently running in the market.

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, shopping is restricted to age groups because when we grow older we lose interest in buying things for ourselves rather than buying something for the children around us.

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becomes very encouraging in children and they learn the way of treating young

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, the University of Stanley says that older

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spend money on their loved ones

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of spending on them.

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learn kids to understand the values of a family. So, as I said earlier shopping is buying something for loved ones when we grow older. In conclusion, shopping become a passion for everyone they follow the current trend and treat other

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very interesting. As explained in the above paragraphs, it is limited to age groups.

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helps in the very formal way of understanding the values in the earlier stages.

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Shopping habit of people depend largely on are group they belong to but here are other factories too agree or disagree ? If yes to what extant ?

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