The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart below
illustrate
the world illiteracy rates divided by gender and six Change the verb form
illustrates
region
( South Change to a plural noun
regions
Asia
, Arab States, Sub-Saharan Africa, East Use synonyms
Asia
/ Oceania, Latin American/ Caribbean and Developed Use synonyms
Countries
). Looking from an Use synonyms
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent in South Linking Words
Asia
, Arab States and Sub - Saharan Africa, the Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
women
illiterate Use synonyms
are
greater in comparison with the Correct subject-verb agreement
is
percentage
of men. Use synonyms
Wich
, Correct your spelling
Which
unfortunately
means that according Add the comma(s)
,unfortunately
with
the table Change preposition
to
last
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year
we had a huge Add a comma
,year
percentage
of Use synonyms
women
Use synonyms
of
the Change preposition
in
countries
mentioned below that do not know how to write or read. Use synonyms
As
Change preposition
For
example
in South Add a comma
,example
Use synonyms
Asia
more than 55 Add a comma
,Asia
Use synonyms
percentage
of Replace the word
percent
female
are not literate.
Fix the agreement mistake
females
As
opposite scenarios we had the Developed Change preposition
In
Countries
Use synonyms
that
the rate of illiteracy Correct word choice
where
in
generally is lower, Change preposition
apply
however
, the Linking Words
percentage
of illiterate Use synonyms
women
continued to be significantly higher in comparison with the Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
the
men.
Correct article usage
apply
Nevertheless
, Linking Words
Latin
Change preposition
in Latin
American
/ Caribbean and East Replace the word
America
Asia
/ Oceania, the numbers of illiterate individuals were considerable , and the scenarios Use synonyms
was
the same as the Change the verb form
were
others
Correct quantifier usage
other
countries
, the rates of illiteracy Use synonyms
was
superior in Change the verb form
were
women
compared to men.Use synonyms
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