The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, some

individuals

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believe that normal citizens' health on

avarage

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average

will get worse in the

future

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society.

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, I totally disagree

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this

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idea because medical systems and

resouces

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resources

will definitely improve more and

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lifetime has gotten longer and longer these days.

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with, human beings will be able to take better medical treatment in the

future

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because the medical technology and the system in societies will be extremely in advance.

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, since having a healthy life is vital for all, improving and investing

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medical industry will never end.

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, tons of new medications and methods of

treatments

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treatment

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are developed every

years

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year

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nowadays.

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, many uncurable

disease

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diseases

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will definitely be cured through those new

resouces

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resources

and methods,

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and then

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then

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amount of healthy citizens will

also

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gain in the

future

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.

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, as a matter of fact,

longivity

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longevity

lives have gotten common for a lot of

individuals

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these days.

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a

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proof that humans get

healther

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healthier

than

the

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in the

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past and

the

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apply

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human life has gotten longer and longer.

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, in Japan, many people discuss whether senior

individuals

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should work

instead

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of

retirement

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because they are still healthy and important workload for

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society.

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,

this

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situation will remain in the

future

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and on average, there are many more

individuals

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are

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who are

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healthy.

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, in the

future

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world, standard people will absolutely have

healther

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healthier

life because the medical

resouce

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resources

and the technology will get extremely improved and the time that

human

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humans

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can live

in

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healthy get longer than now.