In the interest of road safety, cyclists should be required to pass a test before they are allowed on public roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some argue that
bike
riders must successfully pass an examination before allowing them in the street in order to prevent accidents. Use synonyms
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essay completely disagrees with Linking Words
this
statement because Linking Words
this
does not guarantee their safety. Linking Words
On the other hand
, putting up a Linking Words
bike
lane and enhancing their visibility on the street is a more effective way to ensure their protection.
The primary reason why Use synonyms
bike
lanes are necessary is because they enhance the protection of cyclists. Putting up a lane dedicated only to them decreases the chance of collision with bigger vehicles, Use synonyms
such
as cars and trucks. If they are mixed with other vehicles, it can lead to debilitating injury or death. Linking Words
For example
, in the Philippines, the number of road crashes related to bicycles is alarmingly increasing Linking Words
this
is because most vehicles are not able to see them. Linking Words
Thus
, putting up roads designated only for them can decrease these incidents.
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In addition
to that, their safety can be achieved by ensuring that they are visible to other road users.Linking Words
This
can be done by mandating them to wear proper attire Linking Words
that is
reflective of light and setting up lights on their bikes Linking Words
such
as in front, back, and sides. Linking Words
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way, other users will be able to see if they will turn right, or left, or if they are using a hazard signal. Linking Words
For example
, most bikes in the Philippines do not have any lights and because of Linking Words
this
, they are likely to get involved in accidents.
In conclusion, requiring Linking Words
bike
riders to pass an exam before allowing them on the road is not the most viable solution to protect them. Use synonyms
However
, lanes that are dedicated only to them and enhancing their visibility on the street is a better way to ensure their safety on public roads.Linking Words
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