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In future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages ?

It is said that the era of vehicles with
drivers
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 will eventually reach its end and in the future
people
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 travel with
driverless
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 means of transportation.
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 there are some negative sides to
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 trend, I think that the benefits are far more. On the one hand, some
people
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 assert that
driverless
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cars
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 cause many
people
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 to lose their job. Nowadays, many works as a
driver
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 and the idea of automobiles without
drivers
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 pose a huge threat to them. As most of these
people
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 are without proper education,
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 means that they will be on the verge of poverty. Take an old
driver
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 who has worked for many years in
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 position
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; it would be impossible to find a new job after the abolition of his occupation.
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, many think that
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cars
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 are not valuable enough. They believe that artificial intelligence is not smarter than human beings, so it is probable that the rate of accidents will rise after the domination of
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cars
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.
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, others argue that
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cars
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 make life more convenient.
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 many
people
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 are sceptical about the reliability of
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 state-of-the-art technology, it is completely risk-free because there is not any human error involved in the process.
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, most collisions on roads are the direct result of sleepy
drivers
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 who do not pay enough attention to the road.
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, with the benefit of a car without a
driver
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, there is no danger coming from bad
drivers
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.
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, Having
driverless
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cars
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 means that the cost of transportation will decrease dramatically since the companies can save the
driver
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's salary. In conclusion, even though a group of
people
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 do not believe in
driverless
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cars
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 and think that they are inefficient, benefits like cheaper and risk-free transportation, make
driverless
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cars
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 a desirable advance in technology.

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