Today, TV channels broadcast men’s sports shows more than women’s sport shows. Why is this the case? Should TV channels give equal showtime for each?

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t is common practice for most TV networks to focus more on men’s athletics rather than
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. In my opinion,
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is a natural byproduct of the history of
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and there should be more equal emphasis depending on the sport in question. Men’s
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are more popular because they have developed
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. In the past, athletics was always the primary domain of men and women were relegated to more domestic roles. Modern society understands
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was discriminatory but the result, higher quality of play among male
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, cannot be argued. A good example of
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would be professional basketball where the male leagues,
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as the NBA, feature some of the greatest athletes in the world, executing complex coaching schemes, and consistently showcasing high skill levels.
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basketball,
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it has developed considerably in the
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two decades, is not
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same level of entertainment though
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may change in the coming years. As
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situation may require
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to remedy, only the ratings can justify equal programming
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. There are
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where
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is already the case essentially,
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as tennis, where women receive equal prize money and the ratings are comparable. In the United States,
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international football tournaments, where the female team regularly advances far beyond their male counterparts. In these examples, it is warranted to give female athletics at least, if not more, broadcast
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, mandating
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policy for all
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before they are ready and the audience exists is likely to produce a strong backlash and in
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hinder the progress of
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sports
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. In conclusion, there are institutional reasons for the disparity in the
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television channels dedicate to men’s and
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sports
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and
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should be corrected on a
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basis. Viewers will decide themselves which
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deserve the most attention, regardless of gender.
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