Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life, what do you think are the reasons for this,do the advantages of the trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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number of people decides to give
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in their later life
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financial status and
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their occupation.
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essay will explain the reasons why the merit outweighs the demerit with relevant examples. On one hand,it is believed that once you are married,the next thing is to give
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especially when the person marries at a young
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it is advisable to marry on time and give
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to prevent some disease
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associated with old
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.Worldwide,it is said to be of importance that once one
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kids at a reasonable
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and
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them,you will begin to enjoy your labour on them earlier and the mind will be at peace from any disturbance related to childbearing
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being a grandmother at
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fifty.
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is why it is said that giving
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early is advantageous.
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,one of the major
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for having
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late is the financial status of the individual.
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,a couple who is still struggling to eat three square
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will postpone any form of additional stress like kids until when they are balanced with enough money to cater for the unborn
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, occupation is another hindrance
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early childbearing.
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,a family who has
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nannies and is
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the health line;the husband being a Doctor and the wife a nurse
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the situation we have in the country where hospitals are short staffed of nurses cannot give optimum care ascertained to the child,
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family will prioritize having
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as the
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thing or when they relocate to a convenient area.
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number of people decide to give
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to
children
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in their later life. To sum it up, giving
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to
children
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early in life prevents a lot of health conditions and complications but in my opinion, couples should be allowed to have enough
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before having
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prioritization
  • financial stability
  • educational prospects
  • personal development
  • health advancements
  • fertility options
  • economic uncertainties
  • parenthood
  • societal norms
  • life experience
  • generational gap
  • upbringing
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