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chemistry education is important or not. diccuss both of view

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I am Nurlaila Sahara Worabay. In 2021, I completed my bachelor's degree in the field of
chemistry
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education
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. During my study, I was active as a research and community service assistant at the
Chemistry
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Education
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 Department. By that time, I was
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several
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 national and international journals.
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, I was active in participating in some competitions related to critical thinking issues, which
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 become a big problem in Indonesia. Those experiences taught me much about the application and usefulness of critical thinking for society. Since I worked on an internship at SMA N 1 Boyolali from 2019 to 2020, I've become more interested. I have
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 done my volunteer work in SMK-IT Smart Informatika
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 with Universitas Sebelas Maret.
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 teacher to teach the unprivileged people in Berkarya communities. I found that critical thinking problems are caused by a lack of knowledge.
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21st century
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, it
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 by students.
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, scientists have to find the best method to improve the ability of students regarding
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critical thinking in
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 subject, and I want to be one of them to participate in solving the problem. The Science and Technology
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 programs at the
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 of
Mahidol
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 a curriculum that I need to advance through to prepare for a career as a lecturer with
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 expertise at my previous
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 program provides compulsory courses
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 as Thesis and Innovations in Science & Technology
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 and Curriculum Development & Educational Quality Assurance, which are crucial for me to improve my professional skills in the research and development of
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 to reduce their severe effects in the future. I
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 plan to devote myself to joining the community towards PPI (Peduli Pendidikan Indonesia) through campaigns and socialization about the benefit of
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 specifically critical thinking on humans.
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, I wish that I could take full advantage of the program to realize my plans. Attaining the aim will be made much easier for me if I pursue a master's at the
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 of
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Mahidol
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 not only includes modules that are pertinent to my studies, but it
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, which will hone my knowledge and bolster my abilities in a variety of
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 to work as
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, which gave me the chance to learn new things and develop networking skills.
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 of
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 is a venerable institution of higher learning and the most esteemed in
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Thailand, with a solid curriculum and material competence.
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, when I
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 at
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, I have higher expectations to achieve my desired career in
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