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You have been working in a company for three years, but now wish to leaving job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter- * What have you learned while working for the company? * Did you enjoyed working there? * What are you reasons for leaving the job?

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Dear Mr.Saleem, I am writing
this
 epistle regarding my resignation from the post of clerk that I held for the
last
 three years. Honestly, the work was an incredible experience for me.
Moreover
, it taught me a number of factors
such
 as effective management of time.
Along with
this
 , I built a strong foundation in my major. relationship with all stuff.
However
, I really do enjoy at workplace,especially, when I have a new relationship with all the staff,
Additionally
, the awestruck road that I usually tend to walk every day.
Although
 all benefits were up to mark, I had an appointment letter to be a manager in the government sector, and
thus
 I would you to provide me with the resignation contract with your signature. I hold high expectations and hope to get speedy action on
this
 matter. thank you again for your attention to
this
 situation. Yours Sincere, Raheel
Submitted by x.ra5eelah on

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Task Achievement
Consider clarifying and expanding upon your reasons for leaving and the experiences gained at the company to make your points even more compelling.
Coherence & Cohesion
Maintaining a clear and logical progression of ideas throughout your letter will enhance its coherence. Be cautious with typographical errors and ensure paragraphs transition smoothly into one another.
Greeting and Closing
Effective opening and closing sentences that clearly state the purpose of the letter.
Task Achievement
You've expressed gratitude and positive experiences at the company, which is excellent for maintaining a polite and respectful tone.
Logical Structure
Good use of paragraphing to separate different ideas and aspects of your message.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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