What are the advantage and disadvantage of leaving your country to live or study abroad
Living or studying abroad
becomes
more popular in many countries. Wrong verb form
has become
This
essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of this
trend.
On the one hand, leaving the country
to live or study in an overseas environment has numerous benefits. One of the main advantages of this
trend is approaching a new culture
. Living in a totally new country
, lifestyles and meeting many people
from other countries may help people
become open-minded, more
active, develop relationships and cross-Correct word choice
and more
culture
understanding. For example
, a student who learns Culture
studies can improve their knowledge through new friends they meet at school or the workplace. Replace the word
cultural
That is
a good opportunity to broaden their horizons besides
theories of the subject. Another factor can be that living in developed countries where the society, the economy, the
technology are developed can be beneficial. All of that supports Correct word choice
and the
improve
quality of life.
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improved
On the other hand
, living or studying abroad may have certain disadvantages that people
should take into consideration. There are always two sides to living in new
Add an article
a new
culture
, although
that is
a good opportunity but
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apply
people
may feel disappointed because of culture
shock. For example
, my sister living in overseas. Getting up at 7 am and having breakfast is her daily routine, but in a new country
, markets and restaurants are always open after 9 am so she seems cannot find a meal for breakfast, except for some fast food stores open 24/7. Another negative effect is that living or studying in a new environment can cause psychological problems. Barriers to speaking new languages are the reason people
cannot connect with friends when they need help, there are no friends, or family members to support make them feel alone.
In conclusion, leaving the country
to live or study could bring about certain benefits, but it is negative consequences should not be overlooked. People
should have well-prepared knowledge and skills when making decisions.Submitted by yeshomeclass on
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coherence cohesion
Good use of examples to support points. Ensure that all points are clearly connected to the topic throughout the essay.
task achievement
The essay provides a complete and clear response to the topic. Ensure that each advantage and disadvantage is fully explored and addressed in detail.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite