You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •explain the important event •apologies for the situation •suggest a new arrangement

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Hello Sam, How are you? Hope you are doing well, I was very excited about the reservation I made next week for coming to Canada and to see you there but sadly a new thing appeared that required me to change the date. You know Sarah my little sister, she's the only female among my four brothers so a lot of focus on her, the thing that I forgot is that her birthday is gonna be in the next week so preparation must be made for her I

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should be present in that important occasion. I apologize for

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surprising change of events because I know you may be prepared to be free for me when I should've come but unfortunately, it's not in my hands. I will be available next month if you'd like I can change my flight reservation to that date so let me know buddy. Best regards, Yousif.

yusif_salihMon May 15 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

153 words

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