The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry
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The given flow chart demonstrates the way in which bricks are manufactured for the construction industry. From an
overall
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perspective, it is clearly seen that the process consists of seven stages, beginning with exploiting raw materials and ending up with transporting the final products. First of all, the main substance which is
clay
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dug from the ground by diggers.
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, blocks of
clay
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are put on a tool called a material grid for grinding them.
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to
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, grinding
clay
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is filtered in a roller machine, and only a fine piece of
clay
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remains. After that, sand and water are added to processed
clay
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before being shaped in wire cutters or frames. In the following stage, rectangle
clay
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blocks are dried in the drying oven for 24 to 48 hours.
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the bricks are kept in a kiln from moderate temperature to high-level heat (870 – 1300 Celcius). After finishing the heated stage, bricks are moved to a chamber to cool down for two to three days.
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, they are packed and ready to transport to the customers.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words clay with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • manufacture
  • bricks
  • building industry
  • process
  • dig
  • prepare
  • clay
  • mold
  • shape
  • dry
  • fire
  • kiln
  • cool
  • package
  • fired
  • overview
  • importance
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