the diagram shows the process by which sheep embryos are cloned

the diagram shows the process by which sheep embryos are cloned
The flowchart in the diagram above shows the steps involved in cloning a sheep embryo. The diagram alone makes clear how difficult the process is. Cloning involves a lot of scientific methodology. The process begins with selecting two suitable females. Both Sheep B's
egg
cell
and Sheep A's body
cell
are removed. They take the
DNA
out of the body
cell
and the nucleus out of the
egg
cell
.
Consequently
, a
DNA
strain and an
egg
cell
without a nucleus are now present. These two cells are
subsequently
joined to create another
cell
, which divides to become an embryo. After all
this
comes amalgamation, the
DNA
from female A is fused with the
egg
cell
from female B. Followed by
this
, the fused
cell
is placed in the uterus of the foster mother where it develops into an embryo. The process ends with the final step which is
successful
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the successful
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cloning of lamb from female A from which the initial
DNA
was taken.
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