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the diagram shows the process by which sheep embryos are cloned

the diagram shows the process by which sheep embryos are cloned
The flowchart in the diagram above shows the steps involved in cloning a sheep embryo. The diagram alone makes clear how difficult the process is. Cloning involves a lot of scientific methodology. The process begins with selecting two suitable females. Both Sheep B's
egg
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cell
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 and Sheep A's body
cell
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 are removed. They take the
DNA
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 out of the body
cell
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 and the nucleus out of the
egg
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cell
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.
Consequently
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, a
DNA
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 strain and an
egg
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cell
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 without a nucleus are now present. These two cells are
subsequently
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 joined to create another
cell
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, which divides to become an embryo. After all
this
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 comes amalgamation, the
DNA
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 from female A is fused with the
egg
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cell
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 from female B. Followed by
this
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, the fused
cell
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 is placed in the uterus of the foster mother where it develops into an embryo. The process ends with the final step which is
successful
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the successful
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 cloning of lamb from female A from which the initial
DNA
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 was taken.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words egg, cell, dna with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • donor cell
  • egg cell
  • enucleation
  • fusion
  • electric pulse
  • developing embryo
  • surrogate mother
  • cloning
  • genetic material
  • replication
  • implantation
  • cell division
  • somatic cell nuclear transfer
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