Some people argue that space exploration has had more to do with national pride than International effort. To what extend do you agree with this? How do you think space exploration will change in the future?

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Contemporary world, more and more nations separately are being struggled to perform special activities concerning external
space
. Some say that it brings valuable delight to their territories' folks in comparison with international efforts. I completely disagree with
this
point of view. In
this
essay, I will explain my own perspective with examples. On the one hand, there are a number of powerful countries like America that It travelled to
space
several years ago with the aim of burring its flag as the first territory;
therefore
, it was a proud event at which point gained people's contentment.
In addition
, it can show great power over other lands since you can boast your country's technological advances which allow your nation's astronauts as the first travellers as it is known that in the far future, most territories will be able to settle on other
space
.
For instance
, I have an American friend who always rave about the day when the astronauts of NASA
finally
, could walk on it.
As a consequence
, the government could not make people satisfied as the success of
space
schemes can hold, and
hence
, nations are always inclined to their countries'
space
travelling progress.
On the other hand
, the majority of communities, especially environmentalists claim that all territories should give a helping hand to the progress on
space
owing to the devastating condition of our planet.
This
is because if International efforts can be done collaboratively, the
space
could become a habitat for a living
whereas
our earth has not had enough
space
for all populations and it deteriorates as time goes by. As proven by statistics, there would be not even a small
space
for each individual because of the population explosion.
As a result
, if we want to save our planet, scientists from all around the world should do research collaboratively,
hence
, making outer
space
the second living venue for mankind. In conclusion,
space
exploration has been done for several years by different nations to boast their capabilities in external
space
;
nonetheless
, there would be a variety of benefits on our earth if scientists worked together. Personally, in my opinion, working collaboratively is highly likely that bring the whole nation's satisfaction
as well as
preserve the earth.
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