The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The graph compares
about
how many people generate Carbon dioxide(CO2) in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
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Overall
, the emissions rates of Portugal and Italy showed a steady but significant rise over the period, whereas
the percentage of producing Carbon dioxide in the United Kingdom and Sweden experienced a downward trend.
In 1967 the emission rates of the
Portugal and Italy were approximately 1 and 5 metric Correct article usage
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tones
respectively. Portugal’s Correct your spelling
tonnes
rate
grew up to 2 metric toned in 1977 and increased continuously to 5 metric tonnes
in 1997. Then
, the line remained constant until 2007. In the meantime, Italy’s rate
rose from 1 to just over 6 metric tonnes
in 1977 then
the line expanded steadily to nearly 8 metric tonnes
in 1997. After
this
period, there was no change in Italy’s rate
, it kept stable until the last
year of study.
The United Kingdom was initially
the highest in producing Carbon dioxide per person. The amount was well over 10 metric tonnes
. However
, the United Kingdom’s rate
experienced a decrease throughout the period. It went down to exactly 10 metric tonnes
in 1987 and kept moving down to just over 8 metric tonnes
in the final year. Sweden’s rate
was roughly 9 metric tonnes
in the first year of observation and reached a peak at 11 in 1977. Then
, Sweden’s rate
declined dramatically to 7 metric tonnes
in 1987, which was the intersection point with Italy. Additionally
, Sweden’s rate
gradually fell to the same level as Portugal in 2007, which was 5 metric tonnes
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