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scientists say that in the future humanity will speak the same language. Do you think this is a positive or negative social development?

#scientists #future #humanity #language #development
Opinions are divided on whether should the use of a universal
language
 be encouraged or not.
Although
 I acknowledge the drawbacks of
such
language
, I strongly believe that the disadvantages of using it are eclipsed by its advantages. Many believe there should be a diversity of languages to preserve the cultural heritage of different
countries
. It is without a doubt that each
language
 bears certain unique traits that can not be imitated or replicated.
Therefore
, they inspire
as well as
 give birth to myriad forms of art, without which our life would be dull and tedious.
Nevertheless
, from my perspective, these cultural features can be translated into shared and collective knowledge with the help of a global
language
, which later generations would greatly benefit from it. Advocators of the use of a mono-
language
 including myself, point to the practicality and convenience that it provides. Regarding the former, English, which has been around for centuries, is now used by dozens of
countries
 all around the world.
Due to
 the inherent wide coverage of
this
language
, other
countries
 will eventually shift to using English as a common tongue. If all
countries
 used the same
language
, we would eliminate one of the greatest issues of humanity which is the
language
 barrier.
Furthermore
, people all over the world would benefit substantially as travel, business, and education can be conducted without much hassle since everyone can understand each other perfectly.
For example
, people can immigrate to other
countries
 to pursue their aspirations,
such
 as going to a prestigious university or doing their dream job. In conclusion, it is non-negotiable that, thanks to a wide variety of languages, we have multiple different forms of cultural heritage that carry our traditions and identities.
However
, I wholeheartedly support the use of one universal
language
 as humanity can enjoy its aforementioned benefits as a whole.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enhanced
  • streamlining
  • diverse cultures
  • accelerate
  • exchange of information
  • erosion
  • linguistic diversity
  • dominance
  • unequal power dynamics
  • marginalizing
  • reinforce
  • economic benefits
  • reduced translation
  • diplomacy
  • acquisition
  • exacerbating
  • social inequalities
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