Some people think computers and the Internet are important in children's study, but others think students can learn more effectively in schools and with teachers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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education,

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others think pupils can learn more effectively in

academy

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and with

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agree

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nowadays

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we use a teacher for education and

computer

technology it is simple additional equipment for education.

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I disagree

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reason that

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these days almost everywhere in school have

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technology. Yes, it is beneficial for

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drawbacks for health. In

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vision. A number of people support

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view.

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educational

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in school.

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in school wear glasses.

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advantages

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reason and example.

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agree

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the second view.

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system has long been

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teacher

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the teacher

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was more

effectively

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everything. From

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with

teachers

students

understand everything

them

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computer

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internet

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teachers

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computer

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.

These equipment

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for

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additional

educational

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. In conclusion, it can hardly be denied that

teachers

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more effective and does not have drawbacks them technology equipment for

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these reason

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and example that proves the teacher is the best.

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computer

just

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additional educational to facilitate.