Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?
People
tend to settle down in another farther Use synonyms
city
or country when grow up nowadays, but some do not like to do so. They, Use synonyms
in contrast
, choose to live in a place close to their hometown. Linking Words
This
essay will outline some of the reasons Linking Words
as well as
what I consider to be the advantages and disadvantages.
Seeking a similar environment to their own home may be the main reason for Linking Words
people
to spend time living in a close-distant Use synonyms
city
. They may fear being a failure Use synonyms
while
living in a far place where they do not have any relatives, friends or the same atmosphere. Living nearer can Linking Words
also
allow them to visit their parents and hang around with friends regularly Linking Words
while
there is not much impact on their daily Linking Words
life
.
Needless to say, there are some benefits of living near home. Fix the agreement mistake
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One
is the strong social network that they have built since they were small. They can get support from it in terms of emotional, financial and business issues. Use synonyms
For example
, when Linking Words
people
need to deal with the local office to have the paperwork done within 2 days, but the process requires 3 days, Use synonyms
then
at Linking Words
this
point, their relationship may help to boost the procedure quicker. Another Linking Words
one
is that they do not need to feel insecure about life. Living in the same Use synonyms
city
, they may have all the basic things Use synonyms
such
as a house and a car. All they need to do is Linking Words
to
work a 9-to-5 shift daily and spend the rest of their time with their family.
Despite its advantages, several drawbacks are outlined too. First of all, it is a job opportunity. Living in a small Verb problem
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city
may provide a limited number of jobs. Indeed, there are not many chances for them to change and Use synonyms
thus
their income may Linking Words
have
lesser than Verb problem
be
people
who seek Use synonyms
the
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apply
opportunity
in a different Fix the agreement mistake
opportunities
city
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, when they are dealing with routine jobs and tasks, their mindsets are not broadened either. Take Linking Words
one
visa company in Beijing for an example. When they deal with only a group of Japanese customers, Use synonyms
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then
they assume that Vietnamese customers can travel to Hong Kong without a visa as the Japanese do, resulting in them being set for illegal migration Rephrase
apply
fine
at Hong Kong Replace the word
fines
custom
port.
In conclusion, living where Fix the agreement mistake
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people
were born good or bad depends on each person's perspective. Use synonyms
However
, I still believe that it is better to experience some places different from Linking Words
one
's own home to broaden horizons and have better job opportunities.Use synonyms
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