The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with data opened, kilometers of route and passenger numbers per year in millions.

The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with data opened, kilometers of route and passenger numbers per year in millions.
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The table illustrates the detail about
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metro
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the metro
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system operated in six cities
regardling
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regarding
three features, namely, starting year,
route
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length and annual passenger number.
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, the railways which began
its
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their
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operation before the
mid 20th
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century
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to have relatively long lanes and large amounts of users per year compared to the others.
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with, it is remarkable that the subway in London which is the oldest among the given cities
as
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constructed in 1863 has the longest
route
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of 394 kilometres.
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, another railway in Paris has
similar
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a similar
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trend since it is the second oldest and longest with
the
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its
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opend
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opening
date in 1900 and
199
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is 199
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kilometres'
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kilometres
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lane.
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both of these
metro
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have plenty
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of passenger
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passenger
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passengers
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, 775
million
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and 1191
million
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people for London and Paris respectively, the astonishing number in
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category can be seen in the data of Tokyo, standing at 1927
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. In the city,
underground
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an underground
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train service
commerced
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was commerced
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in 1927 with 155
kilometre
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kilometres
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of its
route
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. As for
Wasington
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Washington
DC,
this
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city opened
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metro
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the metro
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system in 1976 and bring 144
million
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travellers
annualy
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annually
on the
route
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whose length is 126
kilimitres
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kilometres
. a half
og
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of
the decade after the construction of
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railway, Kyoto started its
metro
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service with the shortest
route
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compared to others, which is 11
kilimetres
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kilometres
.
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, Los Angeles has only 28
kilomiteres
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kilometres
lane built in 2001 and these metros help between 45 and 50
million
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people to travel in a year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words metro, route, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • underground railway systems
  • kilometers of route
  • passenger numbers per year
  • millions
  • significance
  • historical context
  • correlate
  • infrastructure
  • efficiency
  • tourist traffic
  • correlation analysis
  • investment
  • municipal
  • expanding
  • usage
  • trends
  • observed
  • impact
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