The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with data opened, kilometers of route and passenger numbers per year in millions.
The table illustrates the detail about
metro
system operated in six cities Correct article usage
the metro
regardling
three features, namely, starting year, Correct your spelling
regarding
route
length and annual passenger number. Overall
, the railways which began its
operation before the Correct pronoun usage
their
mid 20th
century Add a hyphen
mid-20th
incline
to have relatively long lanes and large amounts of users per year compared to the others.
Replace the word
inclined
To begin
with, it is remarkable that the subway in London which is the oldest among the given cities as
constructed in 1863 has the longest Correct your spelling
was
route
of 394 kilometres. On the other hand
, another railway in Paris has similar
trend since it is the second oldest and longest with Correct article usage
a similar
the
Change the word
its
opend
date in 1900 and Correct your spelling
opening
199
Add a missing verb
is 199
kilometres'
lane. Change noun form
kilometres
Although
both of these metro
have plenty Change preposition
of passenger
passenger
, 775 Fix the agreement mistake
passengers
million
and 1191 million
people for London and Paris respectively, the astonishing number in this
category can be seen in the data of Tokyo, standing at 1927 million
. In the city, underground
train service Correct article usage
an underground
commerced
in 1927 with 155 Add a missing verb
was commerced
kilometre
of its Change to a plural noun
kilometres
route
.
As for Wasington
DC, Correct your spelling
Washington
this
city opened metro
system in 1976 and bring 144 Correct article usage
the metro
million
travellers annualy
on the Correct your spelling
annually
route
whose length is 126 kilimitres
. a half Correct your spelling
kilometres
og
the decade after the construction of Correct your spelling
of
this
railway, Kyoto started its metro
service with the shortest route
compared to others, which is 11 kilimetres
. Correct your spelling
kilometres
Similarly
, Los Angeles has only 28 kilomiteres
lane built in 2001 and these metros help between 45 and 50 Correct your spelling
kilometres
million
people to travel in a year.Submitted by lisa_smile_2 on
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