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Some people believe that a crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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In the modern world, some social issues more and more serious
lead
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leading
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 to
crime
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the crime
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 rate is becoming higher and higher,
on the other hand
, some
people
 suppose that
bad
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a bad
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 person’s
nature
 is a cause of
crime
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the crime
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 high rate. In the essay below, I am going to discuss both problems and give my views. There is a belief that social issues and poverty are one of
reasons
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the reasons
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 behind
a
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apply
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crime
.
Firstly
, some problems in society could lead to an increasing number of crimes.
For instance
, in the education system, we cannot deny that there are dropout rates getting higher and higher.
As a result
, there are more and more uneducated
people
 who are mostly not accepted to work for a long time,
thus
 they will often do some dishonest
act
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acts
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 to make a living for themselves
such
 as robbery, smuggling and kidnapping blackmail.
Moreover
, unemployment pushes an array of
people
 to work illegally to earn
their
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 living.
As a consequence
, the number of offenders has climbed in recent years.
Secondly
, the
people
 who are living in penury
also
 easily commit an
offense
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offence
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. Lack of money has made
people
 do illegal things to make their living conditions better.
Nevertheless
, it seems to me that a bad person’s
nature
 is the major cause that leads to offenders. As far as I
know
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 human personality and consciousness are shaped
from
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 a person's
nature
.
Therefore
, I believe that bad innate character is the primary reason for
crime
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the crime
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.
Furthermore
, bad characteristics including laziness, jealousy and selfishness could
also
 build up
breed
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and breed
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 future offenders. It cannot be denied that a number of youngsters,
instead
 of working to earn a living, choose to steal from other
people
. It seems that
people
 who are born with an inborn negative
nature
 are likely to be accused of crimes.
To sum up
, many
people
 argued that a person’s
nature
 is a reason for
crime
,
while
 others believe that some problems in society and penury are composed of
crime
 rates. In my point of view, I suppose that a bad innate character is an initial reason to commit a
crime
.
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