Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than other people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think It is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people opine that
sports
professionals should get a high salary,
while
others think it is unfair for other important
professions
.
Although
sports
professional deserves to be paid high salaries because they are qualified and have trained more than amateurs, I believe they do not deserve
such
salary
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since they have less contribution to society than important
profession
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professionals
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has
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.
Sports
competitions become successful because of Professional
athletes
who have
a
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apply
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great qualifications and better
skill
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skills
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than the common
athletes
. They deserve to get a great deal
money
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of money
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as they have been trained at a higher level than normal
athletes
.
Moreover
, it is not easy to be professional since they have to pass
at
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some hard courses to become advanced.
For example
, Cristiano Ronaldo, the highest-paid football player, raises
173 pound
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sterling, because of
the
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their
his
her
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extraordinary qualification and experience from him in football.
On the other hand
, important
professions
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professionals
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deserve to obtain higher income than professional
athletes
since they contribute directly and give
the
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advantage impact
to
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the
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apply
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society.
Furthermore
, people who take
the
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important
professions
,
they
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have
a
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motivated
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motivation
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to look after the community.
For instance
,
the
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for the
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doctor who
take
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takes
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care
for
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of
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the patients in the hospital,
the
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income is not fair
with
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to
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the athlete person.
To sum up
, professional
athlete
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athletes
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have a great deal
money
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of money
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as they have been trained to play
sport
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sports
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competitions. Meanwhile, in my opinion, important
professions
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professionals
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should receive well-earn wages for the reason that they provide their ability to
the
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apply
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society than the athlete who only
entertain
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entertains
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the audience
in
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of
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sports
enthusiast
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enthusiasts
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial remuneration
  • exceptional
  • merit
  • talent
  • demand
  • entertainment value
  • career span
  • physical demands
  • justified
  • unfair
  • criticism
  • income inequality
  • societal priorities
  • sportsmanship
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