Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than other people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think It is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people opine that
sports
professionals should get a high salary, Use synonyms
while
others think it is unfair for other important Linking Words
professions
. Use synonyms
Although
Linking Words
sports
professional deserves to be paid high salaries because they are qualified and have trained more than amateurs, I believe they do not deserve Use synonyms
such
Linking Words
salary
since they have less contribution to society than important Correct article usage
a salary
profession
Replace the word
professionals
has
.
Unnecessary verb
apply
Sports
competitions become successful because of Professional Use synonyms
athletes
who have Use synonyms
a
great qualifications and better Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
skill
than the common Fix the agreement mistake
skills
athletes
. They deserve to get a great deal Use synonyms
money
as they have been trained at a higher level than normal Change preposition
of money
athletes
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, it is not easy to be professional since they have to pass Linking Words
at
some hard courses to become advanced. Change preposition
apply
For example
, Cristiano Ronaldo, the highest-paid football player, raises Linking Words
173 pound
sterling, because of Add a hyphen
173-pound
the
extraordinary qualification and experience from him in football.
Change the word
their
his
her
On the other hand
, important Linking Words
Use synonyms
professions
deserve to obtain higher income than professional Replace the word
professionals
athletes
since they contribute directly and give Use synonyms
the
advantage impact Correct article usage
an
to
Change preposition
apply
the
society. Correct article usage
apply
Furthermore
, people who take Linking Words
the
important Correct article usage
apply
professions
, Use synonyms
they
have Correct pronoun usage
apply
a
Correct article usage
apply
motivated
to look after the community. Replace the word
motivation
For instance
, Linking Words
the
doctor who Change preposition
for the
take
care Change the verb form
takes
for
the patients in the hospital, Change preposition
of
the
income is not fair Correct article usage
apply
with
the athlete person.
Change preposition
to
To sum up
, professional Linking Words
athlete
have a great deal Fix the agreement mistake
athletes
money
as they have been trained to play Change preposition
of money
sport
competitions. Meanwhile, in my opinion, important Change the noun form
sports
Use synonyms
professions
should receive well-earn wages for the reason that they provide their ability to Replace the word
professionals
the
society than the athlete who only Correct article usage
apply
entertain
the audience Change the verb form
entertains
in
Change preposition
of
sports
Use synonyms
enthusiast
.Fix the agreement mistake
enthusiasts
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